| I love this. I was vey bored when I wrote it, so it is quite 'out there'. But it is some of my best work in my opinion. So read please! <3 |
The Vain Ones
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You're SickYou don't understand how unbelievably pitiful I am. You don't understand the deep remorse I feel when I walk away from you; it's like I'm stealing myself from you. It's like you possess me. I've lost myself to you; I no longer know who I am, the reflection in the mirror is a stranger. I find myself wandering through my mind looking for a landmark;You're Sick
Some sort of familiar thought, but I only see you. I hate you. You're sick. Somehow I was able to convince myself that you loved me. Somehow I was able to ignore all caution, all instincts that told me to run; To get the bloody hell away from you. &nb
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The Vain OnesIt was the sound of the drum that kept her hips moving, her lip from quivering, her heart beating. There was no one else in the room; no master, no patrons, no waiters all dressed in green. There was only her and the sound of the drum. The deep pounding was a part of her. It was in her blood, in her bones, in her muscles and tissues and organs, in her mind. She took in a breath. Boom. She exhaled. Boom. The booming of the drum seemed to consume the world, and to create it anew; to create a world that was only the pounding of the drum. The beads of sweat on her forehead ran down into her eyes and left salty traThe Vain Ones
by ~ZorraQuieta
Burning WhiteShe knew this is how this was going to end. She was fully aware of her position, but still, she wept. Her tears left trails of mascara down her cheeks and her sobs disturbed the silence that had settled upon the audience. They waited anxiously in their chairs and stared down at the girl on the podium. The theater hadn’t been this full in ages, there were barely enough seats for everyone who had attended the execution. The girl began to shake in violent tremors of grief; the executioner stood solemnly behind her with the Box in his hands.Burning White
The Box was ancient; it had been passed down from generation to generation for hundreds
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| Hey people... Its Tori here to randomly talk about myself for a few moments. I've been thinking a lot about life lately, and I decided that rather than just do what I'm doing now (which is nothing) I want to do something...helpful to others. If you knew me you would be going wtf right now; I'm not the kind of person to DO something. I enjoy sitting and watching people do things. I decided that I need to make a difference some how. I'm not quite sure how I'm going to do that at the moment, but I know that I'm going to do something. I love to write, I have filled up three notebooks in the past two months with my rough copies. You probably won't ever get to read any of them because I think they all suck, but every once in a while I'll write something presentable and I will post it. I'm going to start posting some writings my best friend Shey has done. She is a little new at writing, so I've been editing for her and helping her think of ways to improve her basic story lines. She's really good for someone who has never written anything for fun before. I love to edit. I review works on FanFiction.net, and I have to admit that I can be a little mean. I'm sorry if you are one of the unfortunate people that make careless errors that I mercilessly flame. I think I hate the incorrect use of commas and semi-colons the most. So beware, if you do make an error I'm not going to be the person that's like 'oh, that chapter left me breathless and i can't wait for more!'. I am going to politely point out your mistakes and tell you ways that you can improve your writing. I know that I am no writing god myself, and that I sound very bitchy at the moment, but I think I know what I am talking about. I am not saying that I am an expert; i have been wrong before. If you think that something i think needs to be corrected does not need to be, or that a comment I made was rude, please tell me. Okay, I have to go to school now. I love all of you who love my work!!! ^^' Love Always- Victoria <3 Hey- My name is Shey. Or just Tori's best friend. Um, I don't know what to write, ha ha. My fave color is blue. I looooove mac n' cheese. Ummmm. Yeah. When I think of something else I'll get back to you. Peace[: |
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- Current Residence: Shey and me-virginia
- Interests: TORI- English,Pathology,London,British accents,SHEY-Music,Juno(dog),Spongebob,Being immature,Boys.
- Favourite movie: TORI-Pride and Prejudice (the newest version with Keira Knightly) SHEY-Star Trek!!!!! (new version)
- Favourite band or musician: TORI- Jason mraz & A Fine Frenzy SHEY-No clue
- Favourite genre of music: TORI- metal, rock, classical SHEY-ummm,all?
- Favourite artist: TORI- *maril1 and *Sandara SHEY-Tori!!
- Favourite poet or writer: TORI-Edgar allen Poe - Chris Wooding SHEY-Jodi Picoult
- Favourite photographer: TORI- Shey!!! SHEY-myself
- Favourite style of art: TORI- Dark Fantasy SHEY-Bright and happy :)
- Operating System: Shey and me- Vista -.-'''
- MP3 player of choice: Shey and me- ipod
- Shell of choice: TORI- the ones on the beach...? SHEY-Conch shell
- Wallpaper of choice: TORI- snowy mountains, Zachary Quinto SHEY-Taylor Lautner,Autumn leaves
- Skin of choice: TORI-.....mine? SHEY-....wah?
- Favourite game: TORI- Resident Evil 5 SHEY-IDK
- Favourite gaming platform: TORI- ps3 SHEY- PS2
- Favourite cartoon character: TORI- Chowder, Cosmo, Patrick SHEY-Spongebob!!!! Spiderman!!!!!!
- Personal Quote: TORI-"i come in 3 colors, red,white,& blue if u beat me up" SHEY-I had did heard it
- Tools of the Trade: TORI- anything that can be written on and pens SHEY-...pens, so I can write on myself :]
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